Comments on: Apple’s Next iPhone to Feature Solar Charging?

By: Zain Siddiqui

Zain Siddiqui — Sat, 21 Sep 2013 19:00:00 +0000

Alright, got it. Thanks for the feedback!

By: Ed Bain

Ed Bain — Fri, 20 Sep 2013 16:53:00 +0000

Of course!

-”Apple appears to be investigating its future gaming-changing feature”
(Should say “game-changing”)

-”A job listing on the company’s website, that has since been removed, a few days ago”
(Should say “A few days ago, a job listing on the company’s website that has since been removed”)

-”fallen over the past decade and make became even cheaper”

(Should say “may become”)

There are a couple more small niggles, but i only picked them up on this second reading, and they are relatively inconsequential.

By: TheMetalSgt

TheMetalSgt — Fri, 20 Sep 2013 13:26:00 +0000

There’s nothing wrong with it. They make great products that function flawlessly, are deeply integrated, sexy, amazing build quality and design and they cost a SH*T LOAD. And that’s exactly what that sentence sums up.

By: Zain Siddiqui

Zain Siddiqui — Fri, 20 Sep 2013 01:39:00 +0000

Could you point out some of my mistakes? I encourage positive criticism!

By: Joao611

Joao611 — Thu, 19 Sep 2013 19:34:00 +0000

“Well, if anyone can implement something useful, it’s Apple. Knowing them it’ll look great, work great, and cost great.”

You might want to review that statement…

By: omar

omar — Thu, 19 Sep 2013 19:27:00 +0000

Wow! Seems impressive enough. A more worthy collection to the iphone bundle would be an effective wireless charger that has the capability to charge the smart phone in a small span of time

By: Ed Bain

Ed Bain — Thu, 19 Sep 2013 18:14:00 +0000

you dont proofread much do you? the only flaw i found with your article.

By: TheMetalSgt

TheMetalSgt — Thu, 19 Sep 2013 18:05:00 +0000

Well, if anyone can implement something useful, it’s Apple. Knowing them it’ll look great, work great, and cost great. But, I’d rather have to not worry about charging as much. I have a solar wireless keyboard. Love it. Never have to replace batteries, it’s always wireless and always charged/charging. A mobile device like that would be great, especially if they can get more efficient batteries to store and use the energy as well. There are both advancements in both solar and battery tech now, so the next couple of Apple products should be interesting, as that will most likely be what the entire industry adapts if it works.